Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Full Story Draft

Hey guys, 

Here is my full story draft. Comment however you wish. Mr. Kizzier I have two question for you. 
1. Can you point out any of the strong points and weak points? Is the format ok?
2. Is there anything you believe I should add or take out that maybe isn't significant?

I will post the Sources at the bottom!

xoxo


BALTIMORE- Street sign theft has become a problem in Baltimore, MD over the years. From kids to teenagers and what is starting out to be a prank leads to drastic consequences. This is a problem amongst neighborhoods and areas in Baltimore and other areas in the nation. This has lead to problems in costs, punishment, and society. Starting out as a game of fun has turned into a costly problem for our society.

            From November 2007 to November 2008 1,730 signs were stolen in the state of Missouri. The costs in replacing these road signs cost around $35,000. The most popular signs being stolen today are road signs resembling famous beer brands such as Rolling Rock Drive and Corona Rd (Van Zandt and Schatt). Many teens and college students who participate in this activity as a drunken tradition hang the signs on their dorm room walls as a display of victory. These young adults using wrenches and many other tools or using their bare hands and body weight to rip the signs off, fear no consequences. Many authorities have found kids are ripping poles out of the ground in order to get to these signs. Not only is cost a problem but safety is as well. Many of our departments of safety, such as police, fire department, and ambulances, are having a difficult time reaching their emergency due to lack of street signs to guide them. Letcher County Judge-Executive Carroll Smith stated, “Fire Department’s, Police departments, and ambulance drivers depend on those road signs to get to emergencies quickly” (Moeurs pg C14). This is becoming a financial problem for city’s and manufacturing companies. A sign panel cost can vary from $115-$150,000. Signpost costs vary from $125-160,00, and foundations can cost between $150-$7,000.

            A local neighborhood in Chase, MD has run into this problem. Neighbor, Shauna Ganzzermiller, stated, “I feel that street sign theft has become a problem. It can really mess up people trying to find their way around, especially for emergencies. I have seen a handful of signs that have been stolen or vandalized around here, making our neighborhood look bad. I personally know people who have stolen street signs. They have even gone has far as taking the whole pole.” When asked if she had ever stolen a street sign, Shauna became very defensive and proud, “I have never stolen a street sign and never will.” When discussing possible resolutions, Shauna was very aware of what our city wants to do. “Not only do we need to be on the look out, we need to make sure our equipment is reliable and even build and post signs on higher poles.” Shauna is not the only one feeling like this; Saint Mary’s County, MD has run into the same problem. In 1998 5,000 signs were stolen total. “In 1999 identification stickers and dating stickers were placed on road signs”(Department of public works and Transportation)

            Today, many cities have switched their road signs to aluminum signs, costing up to $130 per sign. Many officials want signs posted on higher poles and security cameras are even placed on these poles to help catch the suspects. Prosecution and consequences are serious and those considering this act should think again.


http://www.wpri.com/dpp/news/local_news/blackstone/local_wpri_north_smithfield_stolen_street_signs_20090928_drs

http://0proquest.umi.com.library.ccbcmd.edu:80/pqdwebindex=5&did=93246168&SrchMode=1&sid=3&Fmt=3&VInst=PROD&VType=PQD&RQT=309&VName=PQD&TS=1253554714&clientId=60339

http://www.trafficsign.us/signcost.html

http://www.co.saintmarys.md.us/dpw/dpwtemplate.aspcontent=roadwaysignsincommunitycontent.asp

http://www.columbiamissourian.com/stories/2009/01/08/street-sign-theft-costly-tradition/




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